Many people find it hard to balance their work with other parts of their lives.what are the reasons of this trend? How can this problem be overcome?
Some
people
believe that nowadays are quite difficult to manage their time
in term of having a good work-life
balance
. I hold the view that people
nowadays only think about how they can have a good reputation in society rather than living a happy life
without thinking about what others have. In this
,essay I will break down the problem associated with it and how the problem can be solved.
Firstly
, it is normal to assume that people
want to have an acknowledgement from society in order
to have a happy life
. There are several ways to achieve acceptance, one of them is to have a luxury house, cars, and other things that can be seen clearly by other people
and neighbours. As it happens, more and more time
has to be spent on work in order
to secure the money that is
needed for building a reputation. The leisure time
that they have must be used for job and money-oriented activities. For example
, a survey have been conducted on the ten richest people
in Indonesia, and seven of them said that they must manage their business at the weekend, although
it is only the time
they can spend with their family.
However
, they can balance
their work with other parts of their lives if they have a good mindset about how they can have a happy life
. There are many other ways to have a good position in society other than showing the wealthiness to people
. For example
, we can contribute to social communities in order
to have an acknowledgement from the citizens. In this
way, they must not sacrifice their free time
and can be used to other things that will bring to work-life
balance
.
To sum up
, I believe that people
need to change their mindset in order
to achieve a good quality of life
simply by using the work-life
balance
method. The leisure time
that they have must be used in a proper way.Submitted by galihw on
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