Some people prefer to have temporary jobs, which means they only work a few months in a year and use the rest of the time to do what they want. What is your opinion?
It is argued that some
individuals
have jobs that last
only for a couple of months and spend the rest of the year doing other activities
. This
essay totally agrees with this
statement because these people
enjoy what they do and also
they have less stress
After doing the necessary work
, people
do what they want, this
allows them to be happy and appreciate the time
they live. This
is because they are performing something they like, individuals
think that some activities
are better to do as soon as possible, since they don’t know when will be the next time
that they have time
for it. For example
, in Spain a lot of people
when they get their salary directly use it for travelling or activities
that they have planned, that it’s one of the reasons why they are always smiling and enjoying life.
Another reason is, that in short-term jobs, people
have less stress. This
is because individuals
know that the reason why they are working is to get enough money to carry out activities
they like, so they look forward to it. Since they are interested in their goal, the feeling of happiness exceeds the feeling of pressure at work
, and this
causes these people
to have a better well-being. For instance
, for people
who are always cheerful, it is easier for them to manage and control stress and as a consequence
, it is less likely for them to get a serious disease.
In conclusion, dedicating a short time
period to work
and the rest of the time
devoted to what people
enjoy doing, allows individuals
to do what they enjoy and also
reduces the pressure gained at work
.Submitted by elenazheng1211 on
Unauthorized use and/or duplication of this material without express and written permission from this site’s author and/or owner is strictly prohibited. Excerpts and links may be used, provided that full and clear credit is given to Writing9 with appropriate and specific direction to the original content.
Your opinion
Don’t put your opinion unless you are asked to give it.
If the question asks what you think, you MUST give your opinion to get a good score.
Don’t leave your opinion until the conclusion.
Here are examples of instructions that require you to give your opinion:
...do you agree or disagree?...do you think...?...your opinion...?