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The table below gives information on cmsumer spending items in four different countries in zoa. Of national consumer expenditure by category 2008

The table below gives information on cmsumer spending items in four different countries in zoa. Of national consumer expenditure by category 2008
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The table chart shown provides an idea about consumer spending items in four different countries in zoa. in 3 categories and these are food, Drinks and cigarettes. and clothing and footwear. and
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 is leisure and educational spending. with
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 ,table we can see what country is spending the most on snacks, clothing and education. by looking at the chart you could say that the highest splendours in the food/refreshment/tobacco category among the four different lands of Zoa, Is Turkey. taking first place by almost 34%. In second is Ireland which spent 29% of their money on foodstuff/drinks/tobacco. 3rd in Spain with 18.8%.
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 the countries' spending on cuisine/Drinks/tobacco is wildly different, You can not say the same about the other two categories. The clothing and footwear section does not show a lot of proportion differentiation except for Italy, Their footwear and clothing spending is up by 3% compared to their counter-parties

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