In the future all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think the advantages of driverless vehicles outweigh the disadvantages?

In the future, many

transportations

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will be

operate

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without

driver

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drivers

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,

therefore

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only passengers

who

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will be in the vehicle. I personally believe that a vehicle with

driver

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has more

benefit

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because of the safety for us to use the transportation. On the positive

sides

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,

this

technology will help us to go wherever we want without feeling tired because we don’t have to drive.

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,

people

who

has

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high mobility

doesn’t

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need to hire a

driver

and it can help reduce the

cost

. It can

also

apply for a company to decrease their transportation

cost

and it can make a good impact

to

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their expenses.

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, if the operation activity from a company needs to deliver their goods to the customer, it will save more money because it can reduce the

cost

of

shipping

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process.

For

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the negative

sides

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,

the

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safety is still questioned by some

people

. We

not

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sure about the reliability and how the technology

handle

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the problem when it

used

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by

people

.

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,

eventhough

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even though

it can reduce

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the cost

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cost

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for

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our daily

activity

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, it

also

can make a lot of

driver

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drivers

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lose their job and cause

an

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increase

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unemployment

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. As we know, there are so many

people

especially

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in developing

country

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countries

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who

has occupation

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as a

driver

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as a result

of

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of

this

growing sector. In conclusion,

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transportation with driverless has more disadvantages due

some

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to some

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perspectives and for some

people

it

less

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secure. In my opinion, safety is the most important thing for

people

to use a vehicle.