The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. ,1191ummarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant

The table below gives information about the underground railway systems in six cities. ,1191ummarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant
The table depicts information about the passengers each year, distance and date of opening the
railways
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system in six cities.
Overall
, it is noticeable that the 3 oldest railway systems (London,
Paris
and
Tokyo
) have longer kilometres of the route than the newest ones (Washington DC, Kyoto, Los Angeles).
To begin
with, London built the first underground rail system in 1863 and has the longest length of all other 5 cities and has a much lower number of passengers every year compared to
Paris
and
Tokyo
, approximately 775 million.
However
,
Paris
and
Tokyo
were built later than London and do not have
such
a big distance.
Nonetheless
, they have the most visited railway system 1,191 billion to
Paris
, two times less than
Tokyo
(1,927 billion).
On the other hand
, new railways were built after 1970, Washington DC has a route of 126 kilometers
while
Kyoto and Los Angeles rail systems have 11 and 28 respectively.
Additionally
, Kyoto has the least visitors in a year, about 1/3 of Washington DC.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words paris, tokyo with synonyms.
Vocabulary: Rephrase the word "information" in your introduction.
Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • inaugurated
  • passenger throughput
  • network extensiveness
  • utilization rate
  • infrastructure
  • capacity
  • comparative analysis
  • disparity
  • ridership
  • underutilized
  • commuter density
  • historical significance
  • relatively recent
  • well-established
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