The diagram below shows the life cycle of the honey bee.
The given diagram illustrates the life span (
cycle
) of the honey bees.
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overall
, In Linking Words
this
picture of the honey bee, we can see from the birth to end process. Linking Words
This
process contains numerous stages, those stages are explained briefly in the upcoming paragraph.
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To begin
with the life Linking Words
cycle
, the first Use synonyms
stage
is laying 1 or 2 eggs by the female honey bees , in a short period of every 3 days. after a couple of days nymph hatches from the eggs , within a five-daydays gap the nymph is little grown and it just flies around the nest where all the other bees are .
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In addition
, the little grown nymph goes to the Linking Words
stage
of moult Use synonyms
and
Correct word choice
apply
it
is Correct pronoun usage
which
also
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a
4th Correct article usage
the
stage
in the life Use synonyms
cycle
. followed by that , within 9 days it reaches the Use synonyms
stage
of young adult and it Use synonyms
also
emerges by others . the next Linking Words
stage
is the maturity Use synonyms
stage
, in which it lays eggs. Use synonyms
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likewise
the Rephrase
Similarly
cycle
Use synonyms
continuous
.Add a missing verb
is continuous
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