Some experts believe that it is better for children to begin learning a foreign language at primary schools rather than secondary school. Do the advantages of this outweigh the disadvantages?

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, learning
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a foreign
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language
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at
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school level is thought to be much more
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beneficial
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secondary school. In my opinion, early
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to foreign
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education is thought to bring about more drawbacks than
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perceived
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. Admittedly, there are a few basic
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of studying
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level.
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, it provides them with
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early
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longer duration for one to get proficient. Studying
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german
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language
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six levels to be certified, one can start preparing for exams earlier, giving him ample time and not rushing later in their early twenties.
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, getting proficiency at an early age helps by getting early
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to student-exchange programs, which could mould the career path for foreign education.
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for increased job opportunities early in their career,
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increased
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self-satisfaction
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, despite the advantages above, I believe the drawbacks
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early foreign
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exposure
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to school kids are hard to neglect. First and foremost, an additional foreign
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course brings
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undue pressure on the
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from an early age to perform, on
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top of the existing subjects.
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has proved to be detrimental to early
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success and a leading cause of depression in kids.
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is the leading cause of concentration distraction among the students, causing
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to focus less on their mother tongue, which in turn
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grades and their fluency. In conclusion,
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mental pressure to perform
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the decreased fluency
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added distraction far outweighs any potential
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of increased
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and
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due to
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foreign
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offered in terms of job and student-exchange programs.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Cognitive development
  • Enhance
  • Problem-solving skills
  • Pronunciation
  • Mimic
  • Native-like accent
  • Cultural awareness
  • Sensitivity
  • Exposure
  • Resource allocation
  • Qualified
  • Effective instruction
  • Overwhelmed
  • Curriculum
  • Undermining
  • Mother tongue
  • Prioritizing
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