The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European counties from 2011 to 2015.

The bar chart shows the divorce rates in two European counties from 2011 to 2015.
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The bar chart illustrates the separation rates in two different European countries (
Finland
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and
Sweden
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) between 2001 and 2015. It is measured in percentages.
Overall
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,
it is clear that
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the percentage of divorce in
Sweden
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decreased
while
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Finland
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increased over the period given. Both figures fluctuated from 2011 to 2015. At the beginning of the period in 2011, the proportion of splitting up rate in
Sweden
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was the highest and in 2015, the highest rate was in
Finland
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. The percentage of divorce rates in
Sweden
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started at around 43% in 2011 and
then
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rose slightly to peak at just under 50% in 2012. After 2012,
this
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figure declined slowly to 44% in 2014 and dropped quickly to approximately 38% in 2015.
In contrast
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, the proportion of breakup rates in
Finland
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began at more or less 37% in 2011
then
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fluctuated from 2011 to 2013 and
then
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rose steadily to almost over 40% in 2014 and remained stable over the
last
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year.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words finland, sweden with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "figures" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "percentages" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "proportion" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "fluctuated" was used 2 times.
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