The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007

The graph depicts how many foreigners visit different regions

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as the coast, the mountains and the

lakes

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from the year 1987 to 2007 in

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European countries.

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, the trend of visiting the coastal areas has increased tremendously over the period of time by surpassing the number of people going to the

lakes

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. it can

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be seen that amount of people visiting mountains rises. From 1987 to 1992 there was a slight decrease in the number of guests in the coastal area from 40000 to around 30000 and

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this

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trend rose dramatically and reached its peak of more than 70k in the year 2007.

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the lake's visitors

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lakes

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visitors witness the moderate rose from 10

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to 40

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only afterwards which increases in a serious way to reach the highest level of approximately 75

thousand

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,

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drops to 50000 in the year 2007. On the

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we can see a stable growth in the number of people travelling to the

lakes

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as in the beginning it was about 20000 and

at the end

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of the period is more than 30

thousand

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