The graph below shows the number of overseas visitors to three different areas in a European country between 1987 and 2007
The graph depicts how many foreigners visit different regions
such
as the coast, the mountains and the lakes
from the year 1987 to 2007 in a
European countries.
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Overall
, the trend of visiting the coastal areas has increased tremendously over the period of time by surpassing the number of people going to the lakes
. it can also
be seen that amount of people visiting mountains rises.
From 1987 to 1992 there was a slight decrease in the number of guests in the coastal area from 40000 to around 30000 and then
this
trend rose dramatically and reached its peak of more than 70k in the year 2007.While
the
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the lake's visitors
lakes
visitors witness the moderate rose from 10 thousand
to 40 thousand
only afterwards which increases in a serious way to reach the highest level of approximately 75 thousand
, then
drops to 50000 in the year 2007.
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we can see a stable growth in the number of people travelling to the Correct your spelling
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lakes
as in the beginning it was about 20000 and at the end
of the period is more than 30 thousand
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