WRITING TASK 1 You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter - describe what you enjoyed about the course -say how much cooking you've done since the course - suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer
Dear Sir or Madam,
I am writing in order to give you feedback about the recent cookery
course
that I passed with you.
To begin
with, as far as enjoying the course
is concerned, I really appreciate your vegetarian lesson due to
the fact that you taught me how to replace the animal meat in my diet with vegetal products resulting in discovering new tastes in meals. Moreover
, the teacher was friendly and professional!
In addition
, I would like to tell you how your course
has benefitted me! Since we have got this
cookery course
together, I cannot stop making vegetarian food leading to using the organic products that you suggested to me. Thank you!
Last
but not least, I would like to suggest to the director of the school a new course
. In fact, this
course
could be completed perfectly with the previous one. What do you think about vegan cookery lessons?
Please do not hesitate to contact me if you require any further
information.
Kind regards,
Mr JonesSubmitted by tony.vantroo on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure that the greeting and closing are formal and appropriate for a business letter. Address the recipient with a formal salutation (Dear Sir/Madam) and use a formal closing (e.g., Yours faithfully) to maintain professionalism.
coherence cohesion
Organize ideas into clear paragraphs, with each paragraph developing a single main idea. Use transition words and cohesive devices to connect ideas and improve the overall coherence of the letter.
lexical resource
Expand your range of vocabulary to include more varied and precise word choices. Avoid repetition of words and phrases.
grammatical range
Polish your grammatical accuracy by paying attention to subject-verb agreement, verb tense consistency, and sentence structure. Proofread your writing for errors.