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Cheaper airfare has increased air travel in the last decade and it has positive effects on nations as per some while others disagree. Discuss both the views. Give your opinion

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In the contemporary era, air travel has become so popular because of cheap
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 hole around the world. In
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 way, some individuals tend that
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 method has a positive impact on nations,but others disagree with
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. In
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 essay, I will discuss both views and , I am going to give my opinion.
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, in
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 century, airlines have shown a significant role in society's lifestyle. Cheaper lines have preferred because they believe that not only do they are comfortable but they
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 have more suitable prices than other travel methods like trips by ship or trans,
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 folks consider that cheaper airfare gives opportunities for them to save money and time too.
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, one of Norway's airline companies presents the lowest price
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 for their customers ,
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 it became so famous in their nation.
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, some individuals tend that cheap
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 from airline companies are a method of advertising to encourage societies to utilise their products. Meanwhile, some people considered that if one airline company decided to present low prices
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 for their customers it would reduce their staff quality. In
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 way, researchers consider that customer satisfaction is too low than airlines which sell high-priced cards.
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, the quality of seats, nutrition and employee's behaviour are too bad. In conclusion, cheaper airfares have both benefits like opportunities to save money and time , but on the opposite, it has drawbacks
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 as poor qualities like nutrition or too close seats. From my point of ,view the advantages of cheaper airlines outweigh than disadvantages.

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task achievement
Ensure your essay addresses all parts of the task directly, offering balanced viewpoints before stating your opinion.
task achievement
For a richer discussion, explore how cheaper airfares impact the environment, economy, and intercultural exchanges, adding depth to your argument.
coherence cohesion
Organize ideas clearly and use paragraphs effectively, separating different points and making sure they all contribute to your overall argument.
coherence cohesion
Make stronger connections between your ideas with transitional phrases to guide the reader smoothly from one point to the next.
coherence cohesion
Consider revising sentences for clarity and accuracy, fixing grammatical and punctuation errors that can distract from your message.
task achievement
You present viewpoints from both sides before sharing your opinion, as the task requests.
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You’ve made good attempts to provide specific examples to support your points.
coherence cohesion
Your introduction and conclusion are clear, effectively framing your essay.
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