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The two maps illustrate differences on an access of street to city hospital in the years 2007 and 2010

The two maps illustrate differences on an access of street to city hospital in the years 2007 and 2010
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The maps depict the changes that took place from the
year
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 2007 to the
year
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 2010 from the street to the city hospital.
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,
it is clear that
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 building a particular space for
bus
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station
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stations
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 in the area was one of the major amendments.
Also
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, the parking space for public vehicles has changed from
last
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year
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.
However
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, the city hospital covered by the ring
road
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 remained at the same position over the whole period. In the
year
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 2007, there was no facility for roundabouts, but it was built at the turning points of the city
road
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, hospital
road
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 and ring
road
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.
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, there were distinct
bus
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 tops around the hospital
road
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 in 2007 which transformed into a big
bus
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 station in the west direction.
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, a separate and huge parking spot was built for common people on the right side of the hospital as compared to the
year
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 2007, which offered a combined car park for both the public and staff near the old
bus
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 stops.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words year, bus, road with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: Only 6 basic words for charts were used.
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Vocabulary: The word "changes" was used 2 times.
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