Around the world, many adults are working from home, and more children are beginning to study from home because technology has become cheaper and more accessible. Do you think this is a positive or negative development? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

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As the world progresses the amount of technological advancement and accessibility increases, making it more affordable to consumers. Which leads to
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and adults studying and working from their homes. In my ,perspective it is a negative development because it decreases the productivity level of adults and
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may have disciplinary issues.
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, the adults who
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may see that their productivity decreases as time passes. Because when we
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from our
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we mainly use our devices to
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as laptops, pc, etc. We are constantly staring at our devices and doing our
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, no one is there to monitor our actions so behind the screen if we ever feel like not giving proper attention to important meetings we can easily do that. But in the real corporate ,world the whole situation is different because we are involved in doing something,
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as being busy talking to our colleagues doing other
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and meeting different people which really helps us to be more productive and have fun in our
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.
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, the
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who study from
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lack discipline. Because one of the main focus of the schools is to teach their students how to be disciplined. But when the child study from
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they don't have these opportunities to learn. Because at
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they may be sitting or lying on their bed
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doing their classwork or attending their lectures.
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, they may be busy watching cartoons or playing games. Because there is no one to observe their activity. Which in future can lead to serious discipline issues.
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, there was research published on Daily Star during the lockdown
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COVID-19. they found that
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who study from
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lose their interest in their studies and have serious disciplinary issues.
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, technology has many perks to ease our lives. But there are certain things that technology can't overtake,
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as our school life and professional life.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • remote work
  • e-learning
  • accessibility
  • inclusive
  • productivity
  • personalized learning
  • disciplined routine
  • interpersonal skills
  • cybersecurity
  • sustainability
  • work-life balance
  • physical disabilities
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