The graph below shows trends in US meat and poultry consumotion.
The chart illustrates the meat and poultry
consumption
in 4 popular meat species (beef
, pork
, broliers
and turkey), between 1955 to 2012.
Correct your spelling
broilers
broiler
Overall
, the consumption
of beef
, pork
and tyrkey
undergoes some fluctuations, but was almost similar in the first and the Correct your spelling
turkey
last
year. However
, the broilers, which were consumed from 1960 to 2012, increased significantly.
the consumption
of beef
and pork
was around 60 and 50 pounds
in 1955. The
experienced some fluctuation during 6 decades and stayed almost Correct your spelling
They
in
60 Change preposition
at
pounds
in 2007. After that, The amount of beef
and broilers dramatically decreased to just below 60 pound
, Change to a plural noun
pounds
while
after
this
period they had a
opposite trend until the Change the article
an
last
year to stayed
near 50 Change the form of the verb
stay
pound
for both of them.
In the case of turkey , the first report was for 1960 with less than 10 Change to a plural noun
pounds
pounds
. the consumption
of turkey did not change significantly in the given period and always stayed around 10 pounds
, while
the amount of pork
which was consumed experienced some fluctuation.Submitted by shima.majidansari on
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