The graph below shows trends in US meat and poultry consumotion.

The graph below shows trends in US meat and poultry consumotion.
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The chart illustrates the meat and poultry
consumption
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in 4 popular meat species (
beef
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,
pork
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,
broliers
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broilers
broiler
and turkey), between 1955 to 2012.
Overall
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, the
consumption
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of
beef
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,
pork
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and
tyrkey
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turkey
undergoes some fluctuations, but was almost similar in the first and the
last
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year.
However
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, the broilers, which were consumed from 1960 to 2012, increased significantly. the
consumption
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of
beef
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and
pork
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was around 60 and 50
pounds
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in 1955.
The
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They
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experienced some fluctuation during 6 decades and stayed almost
in
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at
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60
pounds
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in 2007. After that, The amount of
beef
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and broilers dramatically decreased to just below 60
pound
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pounds
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,
while
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after
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this
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period they had
a
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an
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opposite trend until the
last
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year to
stayed
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stay
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near 50
pound
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pounds
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for both of them. In the case of turkey , the first report was for 1960 with less than 10
pounds
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. the
consumption
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of turkey did not change significantly in the given period and always stayed around 10
pounds
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,
while
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the amount of
pork
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which was consumed experienced some fluctuation.

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Linking words: Don't use the same linking words: "last, while".
Vocabulary: Replace the words consumption, beef, pork, pounds with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "stayed" was used 3 times.
Vocabulary: The word "almost" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "around" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "significantly" was used 2 times.
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