The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugar cane.

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illutrates

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illustrates

the

process

by which

sugar

is produced from

sugar

cane

.The

process

consists of seven steps of various time

length

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,starting

by

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with

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farming

sugar

canes and ending

by

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with

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dry

sugar

ready to use.       First,

sugar

cane

is farmed and

nurished

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nourished

for

period

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a period

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of 12 to 18

month

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,which is

longest

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the longest

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step

in the whole

process

.Second,

sugar

cane

get

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harvested by

the

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means of two ways,either manually or using specialized vehicles.Third,harvested

sugar

cane

go

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through

yhe

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the

fifth

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the fifth

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step

of crushing,resulting in

liquid

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a liquid

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from

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called juice.       The

forth

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fourth

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step

involves purifying the juice through Limestone filters.The purified juice now goes through the fifth

step

,which

put

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it under extreme heat to allow it to evaporate to get syrup out

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from

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it.

Then

the syrup  is centrifuged to separate

sugar

crystals from

syrup

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the syrup

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.Once that

happened

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happens

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the

sugar

is taken into the

last

phase of drying and cooling which

finalise

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finalises

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the

process

and

produce

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produces

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ready-to-use

sugar

that is

packed and ready for sale.