Some people believe that culture will be ruined if it is used to earn tourism revenue, but others consider that tourism is the only way of protecting a culture. Discuss both sides and give your own opinion.

There is a controversy about whether should we use

culture

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to earn

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or not. Some

people

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think that using

culture

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and traditional

activities

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to earn

money

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is an offence and will ruin the

culture

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but others believe commercialization of traditional

activities

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is the

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to protect and develop the

culture

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. We will discuss both opinions. On one hand, we can understand why some conservative

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protest using cultural

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to make

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.

Culture

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is an important part of any nation. It was made and completed by artists after hundreds of years of history.

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, in each cultural performance, we can see the sacred spirit of each country. For those reasons, some

people

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feel angry when traditional

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are used as a good to sell for

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.

On the other hand

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, I believe commercials should be considered as the only

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to protect the

culture

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. There are two reasons why we should follow

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way

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.

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cultural activity only can survive if it attracts young

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to learn and teach it to the next generations in the future. To attract young

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, we should make a

culture

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showing a profitable

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because no one can do an unpaid

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for a long time.

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, in some countries with famous cultures

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as China or Japan,

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have to pay a lot of

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for a traditional performance. The second reason is that with the revenue from traditional shows, artists can present better performances in order to retain the quality of cultural

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and satisfy the client as well.

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,

culture

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is an indispensable part of any country as protecting and developing

culture

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are our sacred

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. To do so, I believe the best

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is to show traditional tourism so that our

culture

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is well known all over the world and our artist have income to keep their

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and pass it on our future generations.