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You are moving home. Write a letter to your neighbors to say goodbye to them and to thank for their help during your stay. In your letter explain how they helped you say what you will miss the most about the area where you lived invite them to visit you at your new home

#home #neighbors #goodbye #area #visit
Hello dear brothers and sisters, I am Ozan from your neighbourhood. As you know,
last
 two months I have been searching new home on the north side of the city.
Finally
, I have found an apartment which has five rooms. Next Monday I will move,
however
 I need yo your help
while
 I go out from here. Can you take your stuff from on the way? Because
,
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 the truck will approach for taking my furnishers. By the way, it would be difficult for me to leave
this
 nice place. I will miss you. That's why, I will send you my new location.
Also
,you can take a bus and reach my place, not so far away from the city. I will always miss you about our relationship.
On the other hand
, I miss your friendship. I had spent five years in that area. It will not be easy to forget
this
 site.
As a result
, I love you ,dear friends.
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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