Your friend is thinking about learning to drive and would like some advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • say why a driving licence is advantageous • recommend a driving school • give any extra guidance/tips
Dear Sam,
Glad to hear that you are planning to take drivering license. It would be an advantage for you especially
you
are planning to provide Correct word choice
if you
voluntery
medical Correct your spelling
voluntary
volunteer
service
for Fix the agreement mistake
services
countryside
population. The public Correct article usage
the countryside
tansports
are Correct your spelling
transports
transport
at
not much accessible in these areas Change preposition
apply
comparing
to towns.
If you are not enrolled in any driving school. you should think Change the form of the verb
compared
to join
ABC Change preposition
about joining
drving
school. They are providing more Correct your spelling
driving
number of
lessons Correct quantifier usage
apply
comparing
to other Wrong verb form
compared
compititors
in the city. Correct your spelling
competitors
Moreover
, they are providing 30
% discount for Correct article usage
a 30
student
, for that you just need to show your ID card Fix the agreement mistake
students
while
registration
.
You should be Replace the word
registering
vary
careful on road signs Correct your spelling
very
while
learning. Last
week the police captured John for a traffic violation and they are
suspended his driving license for Unnecessary verb
apply
next
six months.
Correct article usage
the next
HIghway
Correct your spelling
Highway
accident
are increasing in our town Fix the agreement mistake
accidents
due to
the sudden turns on the road. So avoid first
few months using Correct article usage
the first
highway
unless it is not Correct article usage
the highway
necessory
.
Warm regards,
JenniferCorrect your spelling
necessary
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task achievement
Provide more specific reasons why a driving licence is advantageous. Use examples or personal anecdotes to support your points.
coherence cohesion
Ensure clear paragraph breaks to improve coherence and readability.
lexical resource
Use a wider range of vocabulary and avoid repetitive language.
grammatical range and accuracy
Focus on sentence structure and grammar to improve accuracy.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite
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