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Fewer and fewer young people are doing sports nowadays.Whiy is this?Is this positive or negative development?

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In
this
 day and age, young people’s attention is spent less
for
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 exercising since there is
taken
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a large amount
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quantity of their activity to other factors.
While
 some potential reasons cause
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this
 tendency , my perspective can extend negative consequences behind
this
 pattern.
To begin
 with, there are some grounds that why modern adolescents’ pastime may be seen
at
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 indoor activities much more than outdoors. They are fully occupied running a making-money race to
fulfill
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 their social needs. That’s why they do not desire to become
one
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of
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members
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 of the gym
center
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. Meanwhile , in the era of new technologies and gadgets youngsters are intrigued
in
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 browsing
in
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online networks as they tend to be more competitive for hunting knowledge. It is an appropriate example that students spend a quarter of their time
to search
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 information
due
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to
improving
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 their qualifications.
Likewise
, laziness is observed frequently on adults’ character since they are addicted to video games or movies which are considered a substantially demanding way to mitigate their stressful situations.
On the other hand
, there may be some detrimental effects that a
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 of young
people
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 time
is
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contributed
for
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to
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 attending
gym
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the gym
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.
Firstly
,
less
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fewer people
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 attempting
sport
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sports
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 can face hazardous health problems
such
 as obesity , heart
attaches
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attacks
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 and
blood
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high blood
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 pressure.
For instance
,
the
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of
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the
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Oxford
university
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 proved that
the
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inactivity can
led
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 to heart
diseases
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due to
 not turning blood properly in blood vessels. Meanwhile, unhealthy daily routines which
not
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 being done exercises regularly to grow individuals’ adroitness , can take a step to make young people
be disappoint
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about
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 their lifestyles.
Consequently
, they
are seemed
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 to lose themselves around difficulties.
To sum up
, there is a growth
on
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the preference
of
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 outdoor activities among young people
due to
fact
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 that they feel
to be
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busy
for
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earnings
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 or a lack of willingness to achieve a goal to do
exercises
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exercise
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.
As a result
, they confirm some health or mental issues to damage them.
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