Some people believe that old buildings should be replaced with more modern ones. Other people argue that we should protect old buildings because they have a special value. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion

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that old

building

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buildings

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should

be demolish

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and

replace

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by new modern

buildings

.

old

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the old

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building

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which

carry

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historical value and

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are considerd

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considerd

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considered

consider

as

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heritage

building

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should not

be replace

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by new

building

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as they can be

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of tourism income.

whereas

old

building

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which are derelict should be replaced by modern

ones

. In

this

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we will discuss both views and present my

opinion

that

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why

old

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the old

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building

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should not

be replace

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by modern

ones

. First and foremost,Certain old

building

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carry historical value and are

symbol

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of heritage .

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, If restored properly they can be used as tourist

attraction

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and money earned by charging entry fees to

those site

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will fund their

maintenace

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maintenance

cost.

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, historical sites in

new delhi

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New Delhi

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are

opened

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for holidaymakers so that they can see those

site

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.

moreover

,

by

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charging them fees covers

outlay

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of

maintenace

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maintenance

of these sites. I am of

opinion

that old

building

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which are

historical

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important should not be replaced by modern

ones

.

However

, Old

building

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which are derelict should be replaced by modern

ones

.

Building

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which

are

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old and in poor condition pose

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thret

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threat

to

its

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their

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residnts

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residents

.

furthermore

, Certain

buildings

in old cities

are

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always pose

thret

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threat

to human life.

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mumbai

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where

Building

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in older

ares

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areas

of

city

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the city

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always

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conisderd

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considered

consider

risky and need to

be demolish

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and

rebuild

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as

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into

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modern

one

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.

Still

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I am of the

opinion

that only

handful

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a handful

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old

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of old

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sites can be replaced

modern

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by modern

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ones

. so building modern

one

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should not be considered

as

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a

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solution to

reform

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old

buildings

. In conclusion,

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old

buildings

are some time

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sometimes

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pose

risk

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to human life . certain amount of restoration can provide

as

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a

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solution

this

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issue. I am of

opinion

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that old

building

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should not be replaced by modern

ones

.