differences between countries become less evident each year. nowadays, all over the world people share the same fashions, advertising, brands, eating habits and tv channels. do the disadvantages of this trend outweigh the advantages?
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modern world has become a global village. It is even seen that individuals from across the world make similar clothing and meal choices, Linking Words
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has more drawbacks than benefits.
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, in Africa, parents were trained by our forefathers that a suitable way to discipline a child is through corporal punishment. Meanwhile, Linking Words
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, clothing defines culture. Linking Words
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, in ,Ghana our local prints are gradually fading away because of the white custom. Most Ghanaians dress like their favourite celebrities. Linking Words
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print clothes and she buys all her exotic attire online. I think copying Use synonyms
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fashion taste will eventually dwindle our unique clothing style and I wonder if generations to come will know we had prints that identified us as Ghanaians.
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, I like to cook and enjoy trying out various Chinese recipes which are very enjoyable. Linking Words
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is a grave benefit to all individuals all over the world to change their regular pattern of eating and even achieve balanced diets.
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Answer the 'Advantages and Disadvantages' topic
IELTS advantages and disadvantages questions normally give you a statement and ask you to comment on the advantages and disadvantages of that statement.
Answer structure for the type of essay
- Introduction
- Body paragraph 1 – advantages
- Body paragraph 2 – disadvantages
- Conclusion
Examples to start your body paragraph:
- The main advantage is...
- The disadvantage of this...
- The main benefit...
- Despite these advantages...
- One possible drawback...