The two maps below show road access to a city hospital in 2007 and in 2010.
These two maps illustrate the changes in road access that arrived at a city hospital approximately three years apart.
Overall
, in 2007 there was no rotary Linking Words
while
in 2010 there were two rotary.
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According to
what is shown, in 2007 there was a bus stop in the northeast of the area, Linking Words
while
in 2010 there was a roundabout in Linking Words
south-east
of the area. In 2007 there was a place of Add an article
the south-east
the
car park for both staff and the public Correct article usage
apply
in contrast
in 2010 there were separate places of Linking Words
the
car Correct article usage
apply
park
, Fix the agreement mistake
parks
one
for staff and the other Use synonyms
one
for the public . In 2010 there was a bus station in the southwest of the area which was not found in 2007.In 2007 there was only Use synonyms
one
exit to reach the car park Use synonyms
however
in 2010 there were two exits Linking Words
one
in the northeast was for the public and the other Use synonyms
one
was for staff in the southeast.
To summarize, the only thing that had not completely changed was ring road.Use synonyms
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