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The pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000.

The pie charts and table give information about the total value and sources of fish imported to the US between 1988 and 2000.
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The three pie graphs and table depict the worth and origins of the
fish
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 in the US for twelve years from 1988 to 2000.
Overall
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, it is apparent that the prices of
fish
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 have been up and the rends of the percentages of
fish
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 imported from the countries were varied. In terms of the table, the whole sum of
fish
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 in 1988 marked by far the cheapest with $6.57B (billion dollars) and
then
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 on there was a gradually increasing the value of
fish
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, ending up by nearly half a billion climbing up in 2000 ($10.72B) from starting point.
According to
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 the pie charts, the proportion of the majority of
fish
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 came from
Canada
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 in 1988, which accounted for approximately two-thirds of the total. Followed by others with 27%, and the total trading
fish
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 from China recorded only 13%.
On the other hand
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, the trends slowly modified the figure for importing
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 from others dominated the imported
fish
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 market and almost doubled to 46%
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 and Chinese
fish
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 export slightly grew to 20%. Surprisingly, there was a significant decrease in importing
fish
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 from
Canada
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, which reduced by about half the number compared to 1988.
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, unfortunately, the
fish
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 market to the US from
Canada
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 recorded the bottom number from three origins categories and made up only a quarter of the total.
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, the rest of the origins occupied three-quarters of the source of
fish
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, 42% from other countries and 30% from China.
To sum up
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, it is noticeable that in the starting year of 1988,
Canada
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 was the primary origin of
fish
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,
however
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, the rest of the countries,
such
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 as China and others, their trading growth rose steadily over the twelve years,
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 the price of
fish
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 market in the US.
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Common mistake: Your writing should be 150-250 words.
Vocabulary: Replace the words fish, canada with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "table" was used 2 times.
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