Your next door neighbour owns a small dog that barks throughout the day and the night. Write a letter to your neighbour requesting that something be done about the dog. Include in your letter: • Your reason for writing • What you would like to happen • A nice, respectful style

Dear Mr Shoh I am your next-door neighbour . You know , your puppy is very small and it always barks . Though it is midnight ,  your small dog does not sleep and prevents everyone from sleeping .     I can not sleep for a long time .
As a result
, I am sleeping
while
I am working . After that , my boss gave me a penalty .
Moreover
, my granny moved to my home and  is in poor health.
That is
why , she needs to sleep for a long time . My granny can not sleep because of your dog . I would like to suggest that you should hand over to dog house your puppy . In my opinion , workers will treat it with kindness there . After a long time ,
that is
, when it grows up , you can return it .      I think you understand me .Because my granny needs a peaceful place.  If you do not do my desire , I will have to deal with it legally . Thank you for your   attention .    Yours faithfully ,      Sardor Utkirov
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Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately

Linking words are very important in your essay.

To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.

Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.

In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.

Linking word examples:

  • firstly
  • secondly
  • thirdly
  • in additional
  • moreover
  • also
  • for example
  • for instance
  • therefore
  • however
  • although
  • even though
  • despite

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Topic Vocabulary:
  • disrupted
  • challenging
  • appreciate
  • solutions
  • training
  • anti-bark collars
  • excessive barking
  • resources
  • well-being
  • distress
  • amicably
  • cooperation
  • concern
  • neighbourly relations
  • understanding
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