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The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a areport for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.

The graph below shows the differences in wheat exports over three different areas. Write a areport for a university lecturer describing the information shown below.
The line graph compares three regions in terms of
exports
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 of
wheat
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 between 1985 and 1990.
Overall
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, the three regions experienced different trends in the time period.
While
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 the
wheat
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 export in Canada and European countries rose with some fluctuations, the export in Australia fell over time. As the graph shows, Australia's
wheat
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 export figure started at 15
million
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tons
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 in 1985 followed by a small increase to around 16
million
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tons
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 in 1986.
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, it declined steadily until it fell to just over 10
million
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tons
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 in 1990. Regarding Canada's
exports
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, in 1985 they shipped approximately 19
million
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tons
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 of
wheat
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.
this
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 figure fell to about 17
million
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 in 1986, but
then
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 their
exports
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 experienced considerable growth to 25
million
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tons
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 in 1998. Afterwards, the figure plunged to below 15
million
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 in 1989
,
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 but
subsequently
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 rose to just under 20
million
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 in 1990.
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,
wheat
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exports
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 from the European Community experienced an increase in the six-year period. In 1985, nearly 16
million
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tons
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 were exported, but
this
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 number fell to about 14
million
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 in 1986.
Then
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, the
exports
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 increased to exactly 15
million
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tons
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 in 1987 and 19898 before witnessing steady growth to 19
million
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 and 21
million
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tons
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 in 1989 and 1990, respectively.

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Vocabulary: Replace the words exports, wheat, million, tons with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "graph" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "figure" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "fell" was used 4 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "growth" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "increase" was used 3 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • wheat exports
  • trend
  • significant increases
  • significant decreases
  • fluctuations
  • periods of stability
  • analyze
  • compare and contrast
  • similarities
  • differences
  • key points
  • potential reasons
  • climatic conditions
  • agricultural policies
  • market demand
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