Tiday, more people than ever are travelling around the world. Do you think this is a positive or negative devlopment?

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convenience

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transport system and greater communication

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,

traveling

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being

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increased at present days.

Although

individuals tend to be connected online globally because of modernization, it is highly considerable that

in person

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connections in terms of business and

tourism

efficiently raised the rate of worldwide travellers. I believe that

this

recent progress could be recognized as a positive trend. On

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hand, international trips undoubtedly assist

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improvement of

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trad

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trade

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and

tourism

industry.

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process not only could

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in sufficient communication among

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the global

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population

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also

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bring some financial benefits for people;

for example

, developed business between different countries will increase global GDP

as well

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tourism

will provide some extra revenue for governments annually.

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, more travelling

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to

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more engaged individuals together and more sense of relations. There is no doubt that a greater amount of

energy

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used by travellers, which is harmful

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environment

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the environment

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.

However

, transport companies are

traying

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trying

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to use cleaner

energy

, it raised concerns that everyone

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prefer

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to travel by plane globally, which

this

kind of transport could produce carbon emissions. These emitted gases have dangerous environmental effects by damaging

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the ozone

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layer.

Moreover

, the air and marine life will be polluted

through

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increasing tourists

due to

overcrowded and using

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plastic materials. Despite

of

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all

this

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points, governments can balance

between

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the advantages and drawbacks of travelling

for instance

, taxation policy and using replacement renewable

energy

will be helpful. In conclusion, the high rate of travelling could be one of the positive developments

due to

its vital benefits for trade and

tourism

.

In addition

, the disadvantages of raised global trips could be managed with some new policies

such

as taxes and using clean

energy

.