The chart below gives information about the adults with education at high school level in six countries in 2010.

The chart below gives information about the adults with education at high school level in six countries in 2010.
The bar chart depicts the proportion of upper secondary education levels between two
age
groups in six nations, namely: Germany, USA, Russia, South Korea, Brazil and China in 2010.
Overall
,
it is clear that
the percentage of high
school
graduates in the 25-34
age
group was higher than the 55-
64’s
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figure in almost every country, except for the US.
Additionally
, South Korea had the largest ratio of the young group’s high
school
graduates,
while
the opposite is true for the US. To be more specific, in South Korea, approximately 98% of people aged
from
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25 to 34 finished high
school
, compared to 91% in Russia.
In contrast
, the proportion of those at the
age
55-64 completing upper-secondary
school
in both of these nations is much lower, only at 42% and 70%, respectively.
Similarly
, there was a huge difference in Brazil, with 52% in the young
age
group and it nearly doubled the figure for its counterpart. Apropos the others, China had the lowest percentage of people with high
school
diplomas with only 20% in the 25-34s and 10% more than the 55-64s. In Germany and the USA, there was a small variation between the figures for the two
age
groups.
However
, in Germany, the proportion of the senior group was higher than that of the juniors, at 88% and 82%, respectively. Meanwhile, in the US, they were 88% for the young and 90% for the old.
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