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Writing Samples
Band 8

You have seen a job advertised in the newspaper. You want to apply for the job. Write a letter to the manager of the company. In your letter • provide information about yourself • give details of your previous work experience • Say why the company should consider you for the job You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir,

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Dear Sir/Madam, I hope you are doing well. I am writing to inquire about the hiring which the company posted two months ago. My name is John Smith. I wanted to apply for
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 Food service supervisor position available. I meet all the requirements which are mandatory for
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 genre of work. As there is minimum of one year of previous experience is required and I worked as a Food service supervisor in Toronto for the
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 two years but
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 the Pandemic , my company could not survive and laid off all the employees, So
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 why I am hunting for the jobs , similar to my interest. I am well capable of handling all the inventories , sales and scheduling in the store. I would greatly appreciate it if you consider my application or call me for an interview as I believe that I am a suitable person for
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 posting as I have been rewarded as the employee of the month and have all the certifications required to work
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, food handler certification,certified restaurant trainer and best inventory handler.
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, I can assure you that I will not disappoint you . I will be looking forward to your response. Thank you. Yours sincerely, John Smith.

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task achievement
Ensure to provide more detailed information about your skills and how they relate to the job, making a stronger case for why you should be considered.
coherence and cohesion
Try to vary your sentence structure to improve the flow of your letter. For example, combine shorter sentences for greater coherence.
task achievement
The letter maintains a courteous tone throughout, which is appropriate for a job application.
task achievement
You effectively communicated your relevant previous experience, which strengthens your application.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • I am writing to express my interest in the [Position] advertised in [Newspaper].
  • I have [number] years of experience in [Your Field/Industry].
  • In my previous role at [Previous Company], I was responsible for [Key Responsibilities].
  • I successfully [Achievement or Project], which resulted in [Result/Impact].
  • I am particularly attracted to [Company Name] because of [Reason].
  • I believe my skills in [Key Skill] and [Another Skill] align well with the requirements of the job.
  • My ability to [Relevant Skill or Experience] would make a valuable addition to your team.
  • I am eager to contribute to [Company Name]’s success by [How You Can Contribute].
  • Thank you for considering my application. I look forward to the possibility of discussing my application further.
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