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Task 1: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. Your local bookshop has invited members of the public to recommend a guest speaker for an upcoming event that will include a series of talks from well-known people. Write an e-mail to the bookshop. In your e-mail: • suggest a speaker • say what they would contribute to the event • explain why other people would be interested too

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Dear the Bookshop Organizer, I am Truong Trong Tin who
is living
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 near the bookshop. I am writing to recommend Sir
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 Khue as a guest speaker for your upcoming
event
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. He is a long-time professor of traditional music and has over 40 years of research in that field. He would be a valuable addition to your
event
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 because he can provide insights into traditional music of expertise that are both informative and engaging. He is
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 a skilled communicator who is able to connect with audiences of all ages. I believe that Sir. Khue professor would be a popular speaker at your
event
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. He is well-known in that field. His talk would be of interest to a wide range of people. I encourage you to consider Sir. Khue professor as a guest speaker for your
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. I believe that he would make a significant contribution to the success of the
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. Kind regards, Trong Tin
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