A museum near your home is looking for people to do part-time voluntary/ unpaid work. You would like to do some voluntarylunpaid work at the museum. Write a letter to the museum director to apply for the voluntarylunpaid work. In your letter • explain why you want to do voluntarylunpaid work at the museum • describe some skills and qualities you have that would be useful • give details of when you would be available for work

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letter to let you know that I am interested in working in the museum without payment. I am a graduate in 'History'. I like historical places and museums as it shows our ancient culture. My grandfather worked in a museum before and I have heard many interesting stories so, I would like to be a part of preserving our history. I believe

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job with no wages. A year ago, I worked as a volunteer in another museum in London

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, I have experience in the same

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, I have good skills in communication that will help me to work as an effective guide. As I have experience and education in the same field,

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will definitely help me to deliver good quality work. I will be available for the next six months because my post-graduation course will start after that. It would be helpful if you could inform me a day prior to joining. I am eagerly waiting to hear from you soon. Yours sincerely, Martin Manuel

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Coherence and Cohesion: 5.0

Logical structure

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Lexical resource: 8.0

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Grammatical Range: 8.0

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Task Achievement: 6.0

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voluntary/unpaid work
museum
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director
skills
qualities
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interest
opportunity
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contribution
community
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knowledge
communication
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