the graph below shows radio and television audiences through out the day in 1992. Summarize the finformation by selecting and reporting the main freatures, and make compraions where relevant.

the graph below shows radio and television audiences through out the day in 1992. Summarize the finformation by selecting and reporting the main freatures, and make compraions where relevant.
The graph illustrates how much the percentage of people watching television has changed at different times of the day ,in 1992.
Overall
, at the beginning of the day, most people watch television ,
while
at the end
of the
,
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daytime the biggest percentage of individuals listen to the radio ,
this
being the most practised activity.
Firstly
, starting with the public who listened to the radio, at 6 o'clock
this
number started to increase until 8 , when it reached its peak of nearly 30%.
Then
,
this
number decreased slowly until 4 o'clock, being nearly 0%, and
then
it started to grow a little bit again.
Secondly
, continuing with the people who watched television ,
this
value increased at an irregular rate , with different variations ,until 10 o'clock at midnight when it reached its peak ,close to 50% ,and
then
decreased sharply, becoming nearly 0%. The only time of the daytime when the same amount of individuals listened to the radio as the number watching TV was at 1 at noon.
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