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You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You were late for a friend’s wedding recently and would like to explain why. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • apologize for being late • explain the reason why you were late • suggest some activities you could do together when you both have time Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .....................,

#minutes #friend’s #friend #reason #activities #time #addresses
Dear Thomas, I hope
this
 email finds you in radiant health and you are doing well. I am writing
this
 email to express my apology for being late unexpectedly in your wedding program
last
 week at City Convention Hall. First and foremost, I was really over the moon when I got the invitation letter about your marriage ceremony which was held on the 5th of April.
Although
 I had a good preparation to attend
this
 program, I was a little bit late because of having huge traffic congestion in the metropolitan area.
However
, I firmly believe that you will consider
this
 late coming
due to
 unavoidable situation and I am really apologised for attending late in
this
 wedding program.
Besides
, I would like to make a plan with some activities
such
 as horse riding and kayaking in the next month so that we can get together and enjoy the day with friends and family members. Please let me know your convenient time for
this
 event. Once again, I am extremely apologised for being late for your wedding event. I look forward to hearing from you soon regarding the confirmation of the get-together party. Yours lovingly, Robert
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task achievement
Make sure to directly address the task's prompts with clear statements that ensure the reader isn't left guessing your intentions or feelings about being late. While you've covered all points, directly stating your apology with phrases like 'I sincerely apologize' at the beginning could enhance clarity and emotional impact.
coherence cohesion
Using a variety of connectors and transitions would further enhance the flow of your letter. For instance, phrases like 'On another note' or 'Moreover' could seamlessly connect your suggestions for future activities with the preceding apology and explanation.
task achievement
Consider using a more traditional closing in informal letters such as 'Best wishes,' or 'Warm regards,' followed by your name to maintain a suitable writing tone throughout the letter.
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