The chart below show's information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.

The chart below show's information about changes in average house prices in five different cities between 1990 and 2002 compared with the average house prices in 1989.
The provided diagram illustrates the proportion of household prices across five diverse nations over 5-year periods
compare
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compared
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to a 6-year period throughout the reporting time.
An
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overall
, it is clear from the bar graph that Madrid and Frankfurt are the only two cities where the housing cost slightly rose and remained approximately the same during 1996-2002.
Whereas
, the rest three countries dropped in 1990-1995. Observing the details, it is remarkable that Madrid and New York gradually climbed to reach
its
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peak of 4% and 5% respectively in 1996-2002
while
in, contrast Frankfurt slowly decreased to roughly 2% comparable to London which started at -7%
then
dramatically soared by nearly 12% during 1996-2002.
On the contrary
, Tokyo was
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at the bottom line throughout the reporting period.
To sum up
, with what has been analysed and compared it is crucial to highlight that New York, Madrid, Frankfurt and London households are increasing more in
this
era.
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