The two maps below show an island, before and after the construction of some tourist facilities. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.
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The given maps indicate the difference between a small
island
that has been developed for tourism.
It can be seen that the island
has changed rapidly with the construction of some tourist facilities. The island
has a lot of places for accomodation
and Correct your spelling
accommodation
beach
has been exploited for swimming.
Looking at the maps in more detail, a large number of small huts have been built for visitors who could stay on the Correct article usage
the beach
island
. The reception building has been built in the middle of the island
, and the restaurant is on the north side of the island
.
As well as
the layouts mentioned above, the new facilities on the island
include a pier where boats and ships can dock. There was a vehicle track linking the pier, the reception, and the restaurant. And the
huts were connected by footpaths. Correct word choice
The
Finally
, the beach was designed so tourists could swim and walk on the west side of the island
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Conclusion: The conclusion is too long.
Basic structure: Change the fourth paragraph.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words island with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "maps" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the fourth paragraph.
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