The graph below shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in one city over a six-month period in 2011.

The graph below shows the number of enquiries

received by the Tourist Information Office in one city

over a six-month period in 2011.
The analysis shows the number of enquiries received by the Tourist Information Office in a city over a six-month period in 2011. The data is categorized into three inquiry methods: in person, by letter/email, and by
telephone
.
Overall
, there was a consistent upward trend in the number of enquiries received by letter/email and in person. A contrasting trend was observed for the number of enquiries received by
telephone
which gradually decreased over the same period. For the in-person
inquiries
, there was a steady increase from
January
to
June
, with the most significant spike occurring between March to April from 800 to around 1200
inquiries
. As for the
inquiries
received by
telephone
, it showed a similar upward trend.
However
, the increase was not as gradual as an in-person method. There were two plateaus, one from
January
to February and another from May to
June
.
Lastly
, for the method by
telephone
, it experienced a gradual decline throughout the period, starting from 800 in
January
and reaching its lowest point in
June
, just below 400. In conclusion, the Tourist Information Office experienced a steady increase in
inquiries
submitted in person and by
telephone
from
January
to
June
2011.
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  • enquiries
  • Tourist Information Office
  • in person
  • by letter/email
  • by telephone
  • general trend
  • six-month period
  • significant increase
  • steady rise
  • decline
  • peak
  • fluctuations
  • monthly data
  • comparison
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