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Band 8.5

Write a letter to the manager of your insurance company. In your letter 1. Describe the item you lost 2. explain how you lost it 3. tell the insurance company what you would like them to do

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Dear Sir or Madam, Hope you are doing well. I am writing
this
 letter to inform you about the insurance which I took on my
iPad
 from your company. I lost my
iPad
 on Friday , 13 July 2024.
This
 was a black colour I-Pad with series 11 and 212 GB of space.
Last
 weekend I visited my friend's house, located in Kitchener City.
Additionally
, I went there by train I was using my
iPad
 but when I reached my destination I saw that my
iPad
 was not in my bag. I contacted the railway station department and registered the complaint. Unfortunately, they were not able to find my
iPad
. I want to request
according to
 the insurance policy if any item is lost your company give me the market value of that item or you will send me that same item.
Thus
, kindly give me money or send me a new
iPad
. I am waiting for your positive reply towards my matter. Yours Faithfully, Peter.
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task achievement
Ensure you include any specific claim number or policy number in your letter. This way, the insurance company can quickly locate your information. This would also increase the completeness of the response.
coherence cohesion
You can improve coherence by using more varied transition words or phrases to connect your ideas more smoothly. Words like 'therefore', 'consequently', or 'moreover' can help improve the flow of the text.
task achievement
You addressed all parts of the task, giving specific information about the lost item, how it was lost, and what action you want the insurance company to take.
coherence cohesion
The structure of your letter is logical and each paragraph focuses on a single idea, which helps in understanding your points clearly.
task achievement
Your tone is appropriate and polite, which is suitable for a formal letter to an insurance company.
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