While on a business trip in another city, you met an old friend who lives there. You are going on another business trip to this city soon and would like to see him/her again. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: - tell him/her about your trip; - say why you were happy to see him/her; - suggest an arrangement for you to meet.

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Dear Ali, I'm writing in regard to my business trip to Tbilisi as I have to commit the internal yearly audit of our branch company. It will take 2 days to fulfil my duties and

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I have the whole weekend on my own. I had great times during my

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visit and it's mainly because of being accompanied by you. It was great to recall all my study years as you brought up events that I have no memory of.

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, it was a pleasure to be guided by you within the city as I was astonished by your knowledge of the history of venues and individuals who lived and created there.

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, I'm looking forward to catching up again to continue our adventure. But I have to ask if it is convenient for you to meet on those terms.

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, I would like to invite your family to the restaurant on the top of the hill with that fascinating city view. Thank you and take care, Regards, Gabi

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task achievement

Provide more details about your business trip, such as the dates and purpose of the trip.

coherence cohesion

Ensure that your greeting and closing are appropriate and formal for a business letter.

coherence cohesion

You have effectively used paragraphs to separate your ideas. However, consider expanding on each idea to provide more depth and clarity.

lexical resource

Use a wider range of vocabulary and avoid repetition, especially when expressing your happiness about seeing your friend.

grammatical range and accuracy

Revise and correct minor grammatical errors throughout the letter.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 7.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 9.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 7.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

170 words

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