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In the future, nobody will buy printed newspapers or books because they will be able to read everything they want online without paying. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

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In the future, neither
newspapers
 nor
books
 will be popular and people prefer to read everything online for free. I completely agree that nobody will buy any printed
news
 or
books
 in the near future and in
this
 essay, I will explain my reasons. On the one hand, with the rapid development of technology, an increasing number of people tend to use the internet as their main source of
news
 because not only is it convenient, but
also
 it is inexpensive. For one thing, almost every individual can access numerous
news
 websites and learn about the latest events without having to wait for the next day to buy a newspaper. Interestingly, accessibility to all these huge amounts of
news
 is available at a comparatively low cost. What is more, unlike
newspapers
, online
news
 websites are interactive so that readers can express their opinions by leaving comments. These reasons show that
newspapers
 will be replaced completely by online
news
.
However
, with
regards
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 to
books
, I believe that the trend will be different to some extent for a couple of reasons.
First,
books
 have a cultural value in almost every country and almost every household
keep
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 a library that contains
books
 from different fields.
Second,
books
 are used as a decorative feature in many homes.
For instance
, I have a library with many
books
 and some vases which
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 adored by anyone who visits me in my home.
Last
 but not least, when it comes to literary
books
such
 as poems and novels, reading printed
books
 and thumbing through
pagesfeels
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pages feel
 better from
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 point of view.
For instance
, I cannot stand reading an electronic version of a novel because it is so tedious to me. In conclusion, I would argue that
although
 online
news
 sites will completely take the place of
newspapers
, specific categories of
books
 will continue to keep their popularity to some extent.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • cost-effective
  • cultural value
  • sentimental value
  • reliability
  • distracting
  • access to
  • digital devices
  • internet
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