You have seen an advertisement in an Australian magazine for someone to live with a family for six months and look after their six-year-old child. Write a letter to the parents. In your letter explain why you would like the job give details of why you would be a suitable person to employ say how you would spend your free time while you are in Australia

Dear Sir or Madam, I am Mohammadreza Hadavi, and I am writing

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letter in response to your advertisement concerning someone who must live with your family and care for your six-year-old child. Actually, I am studying psychology, and I intend to pursue a PhD in children's psychology. Your job position gives me a golden opportunity to evaluate my knowledge in a practical atmosphere, which is truly invaluable. To assure you about my skills, I can send my certification and a recommendation from my master's program.

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, I have 6 years' experience in diverse workshops related to children. In these workshops, we have taught children to enhance their abilities, especially critical thinking. I would prefer to spend my free time in nature, since it not only provides me with a meaningful sense of tranquillity but

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acts as a sanctuary to escape from the pressures of the fast-paced modern world. Thank you for your time and consideration, and do not hesitate to ask me any questions that will help you to know more about me. Yours faithfully, Mohammadreza Hadavi

m.hadavi20

Sep 9, 2025

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formality

Polite tone and proper letter format.

content

Shows fit with child work through past work with children.

Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 6.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 9.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 5.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

8 paragraphs

180 words

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Topic Vocabulary:

Childcare, Nurturing, Patience, Creativity, Early childhood development
Babysitting, Au pair, Engaging, Responsible, Enthusiastic
Safety, Trustworthy, Adaptability, Proactive, Cultural exchange
Activities, Educational games, Language skills, Exploring
Volunteering, Community involvement, Australian culture
Flexibility, Personal traits, Schedule, Enrichment

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