your English-speaking friend has asked for your help with a college project he or she is doing about celebrating Nes Year in different countries. write a letter to your friend. in your letter write a letter to your friend.in your letter : 1 say how important new year is to people in your country . 2describe now new year is celebrated in your country . 3 explain what you like about New Year celebrations in your countey.
Dear Anna ,
How are you? It’s
have
been so long Verb problem
apply
to
Correct word choice
since to
meet
you. Wrong verb form
met
Last
year it must
Verb problem
was
on
Change preposition
at
Susan
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Susan's
weddings
.
As just three months are left in Fix the agreement mistake
wedding
a
new year , I want you should join us Correct article usage
the
this
time it would be a a lot of fun. If I talk about why it is important,
because that event is related to the history of my country and is one of the Remove the comma
apply
way
to feel their presence around us.
Moving ahead for Change to a plural noun
ways
this
day first
we start by doing some decoration at home just a Add a comma
,first
big
before the new year and Correct your spelling
bit
also
do some cleaning and 31st
of December around 12 AM. We are using crackers eating sweets and Correct article usage
the 31st
congratulate
each other. . On the next day, we are going to gurdwara and pray for Wrong verb form
congratulating
Correct article usage
the developing
developing
of a family.
The part I like about Replace the word
development
this
, this
is the day that keeps the families together and make
their bonding even Change the verb form
makes
more
stronger .
So tell me, when are you coming eagerly waiting for you take care and give my best to everyone .
Best regards
MamtaChange the word
apply
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coherence cohesion
Organize your letter with clear paragraphs. Each paragraph should focus on a different aspect of New Year celebrations in your country.
coherence cohesion
Use appropriate greetings and closing for an informal letter.
task achievement
Expand on the importance of New Year celebrations in your country. Include specific cultural or historical references.
task achievement
Provide more details about how New Year is celebrated in your country. Include specific traditions or customs.
grammatical range and accuracy
Improve the clarity and coherence of your ideas. Avoid run-on sentences and provide clear explanations.