The graph shows the use of landlines and mobile phones in 6 different countries. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and making comparisons where relevant.
The bar chart illustrates the proportion of the usage of landlines and mobile phones in
America
, China, Russia, Japan, Sweden and Turkey per 100 people.
Overall
, it is clearly depicted that land
Correct your spelling
landphone
phone
users
are more popular in America
and China, compared to the other four countries which prefer to use cell phones rather than landlines.
As for the details, almost 90 people out of 100, use cell phones in Japan and Turkey. By contrast
, the Japanese carry the least amount of land phone
users
out of the 6 countries. On the other hand
, the rate of land phone
users
in America
, Russia and Sweden are more or less the same, at around 60 out of 100 people.
Furthermore
, the rate of landline users
in both China and Turkey are
levelled off at 68, which is the highest number of consumers for landlines. Correct subject-verb agreement
is
On the contrary
, in America
, landline customers are doubled compared to cell phone
users
, 30 and 60 respectively.
All in all, the amount of mobile phone
users
are
much higher than landline Correct subject-verb agreement
is
users
among
most of the mentioned countries.Change preposition
in
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Vocabulary: Replace the words america, phone, users with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "compared" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "amount" was used 2 times.
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