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In modern life, it is no longer acceptable to use animals as food or in other products, like clothing and medicine. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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With the development of society, various foods and medicines are made of artificial materials
instead
 of
animals
 as
resources
. So, there is an opinion that it is unacceptable to use
animals
 as food or other goods.
Nevertheless
, considering people's well-being and the function of artificial
products
, I partly agree with
this
 idea. On the one hand, the fact that the function of materials made by technology is similar to that made by
animals
’ leather indicates that giving up
animals
 as clothing and other uses is possible. Take a hand-made coat as an example, its ability to keep individuals warm is as effective as the capacity of the leather of
animals
.
Also
, its appearance cannot be distinguished by human eyes without professional tools.
In addition
, its price is much lower than similar
products
 made by the fur of
animals
due to
 its simple manufacturing process.
As a result
, it is true that clothing can be produced without using
animals
 as raw material.
On the other hand
,
animals
 are still the first ones to be considered when making medicines because some elements which are beneficial to the health of the human body cannot be contained in
products
 which are manufactured with other
resources
.
For instance
, protein is an element useful for the well-being of people.
Although
this
 substance can be through cutting-edge technology, the real protein needed by body health cannot be replaced the artificial protein.
Furthermore
, human-made pills are chemical substances with by-effects compared with medical drugs.
Therefore
, there is a long way to the future where
animals
 cannot be used as medicines. In conclusion, it is undeniable that part of
products
 can, indeed, be made and processed without any animal
resources
, but the view that artificial goods totally replace animal
products
 in all areas cannot be agreeable.
Therefore
,
animals
 are still the
resources
 used as medicine.
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