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I hope this letter finds you well. As you may know , it is our friend , Amir's birthday next week on Monday . To that occasion I decided to throw a party and I want him to be surprised so please keep this as a secret .
Recently,the competitiveness of the job market has been rising at an alarming rate, thus, some are claiming that students should be engaged in studies for at least 18 years. Although there are pros and cons, I totally agree with this above notion,which will be discussed in the following essay.
Some people are of the opinion that the healthcare system should be allocated more consideration rather than other important areas by governments. I strongly agree with this idea mainly due to its effect on the standard of living in a country.
Nowadays, a plethora of countries are focusing on increasing domestic food production in order to reduce their reliance on imports. In my view, I disagree with this approach, because the conditions of each country are different some countries face agricultural problems. Thus this essay will elaborate on both sides of view in the following paragraph.
Nowadays , working as a freelancer is a common choice for labourers instead of having a district work contract with an employer. It can result from the business world's novel demands and can end up with some uncertainties for freelancers.
