The charts below show US spending patterns between 1966 and 1996

The charts below show US spending patterns between 1966 and 1996
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The pie charts illustrate to
us
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apply
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US's spending patterns from 1966 to 1996.
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cars that
was
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in second place
become
Wrong verb form
became
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premier in
this
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diagram.
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