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Recently, the number of people who are doing cosmetic surgery to improve their looks has increased a lot. There are some advantages and disadvantages of changing the appearance.
Thanks to the developments of advanced technology, most formal communication goes online by mail, and it helps to maintain the usage of written language on a daily basis. Although it helps to maintain our writing skills on a daily basis, the new way of chatting diminishes the traditional and formal style of writing.
Although taking risks in individuals' jobs and lives is thought by some to be essential, other people consider that it can be harmful. In my opinion, I think that risks can bring about more advantages for people compared to any drawbacks they might bring.
How are you? It was great to hear from you. Thanks so much for inviting me to your birthday party next Saturday. It sounds great, and 'd absolutely love to come, but unfortunately l've already arranged to do something else that day.
The twenty-first century has ushered in a new era of revolution in the field of technology.Although it has helped a lot in improving the living standard of the population, at the same time the use of computers in every field has caused many folks to lose their occupations.This has led to some serious problems for the general public.
