The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one are of Britian. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distribiuted.
The given table shows where the
police
fund came from in both
2017 and 2018 in one region of Britain, while
the pie charts show in which category this
fund spent
in these two Add a missing verb
was spent
years
. Overall
, in 2018, the budget
allocated to police
was more than that of 2017. However
, in both
two years
the highest amount
of the money
which belonged to the police
budget
, came from the National Government. Also
the largest proportion of the budget
,
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apply
spent
on salaries.
As shown in the table, the Add a missing verb
is spent
amount
of budget
allocated to police
from all categories in 2018 was slightly more than the money
which was given as a fund to police
in 2017 (177.8 m
pounds in 2018 and 175.5 Correct your spelling
million
m
pounds in 2017). But in Correct your spelling
million
both
years
the share of the budget
that came from the national government was the largest amount
. In contrast
, the lowest budget
came from a variety of other sources (38 in 2017 and 38.5 in 2018). The money
came from local taxes ranked second among the sources which provide the police
budget
.
According to
the pie charts, the largest amount
of the budget
, spent
on the salaries of officers and staff in Add a missing verb
was spent
both
two years
, whereas
in 2017 this
proportion is
a bit higher than in 2018 (75% and 69% respectively). In Wrong verb form
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both
years
the share of the budget
which was spent on technology was the lowest(8% in 2017 and 14% in 2018). Only 17% of the money
was paid for building and transport in both
2017 and 2018.Submitted by z.rajabi on
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