The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one are of Britian. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distribiuted.

The table and charts below give information on the police budget for 2017 and 2018 in one are of Britian. The table shows where the money came from and the charts show how it was distribiuted.
The given table shows where the
police
fund came from in
both
2017 and 2018 in one region of Britain,
while
the pie charts show in which category
this
fund
spent
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in these two
years
.
Overall
, in 2018, the
budget
allocated to
police
was more than that of 2017.
However
, in
both
two
years
the highest
amount
of the
money
which belonged to the
police
budget
, came from the National Government.
Also
the largest proportion of the
budget
,
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spent
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is spent
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on salaries. As shown in the table, the
amount
of
budget
allocated to
police
from all categories in 2018 was slightly more than the
money
which was given as a fund to
police
in 2017 (177.8
m
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million
pounds in 2018 and 175.5
m
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million
pounds in 2017). But in
both
years
the share of the
budget
that came from the national government was the largest
amount
.
In contrast
, the lowest
budget
came from a variety of other sources (38 in 2017 and 38.5 in 2018). The
money
came from local taxes ranked second among the sources which provide the
police
budget
.
According to
the pie charts, the largest
amount
of the
budget
,
spent
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on the salaries of officers and staff in
both
two
years
,
whereas
in 2017
this
proportion
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was
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a bit higher than in 2018 (75% and 69% respectively). In
both
years
the share of the
budget
which was spent on technology was the lowest(8% in 2017 and 14% in 2018). Only 17% of the
money
was paid for building and transport in
both
2017 and 2018.
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