The maps below show changed in the city of Nelson in recent times. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparisons where relevant.

The maps below show changed in the city of Nelson in recent times.

Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make a comparisons where relevant.
The map illustrates significant modifications in the landscape and the development that took place in the
town
, called Nelson, between 2000 and the present day.
Overall
, it can be seen that Nelson
City
had
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turned from a small community into a growing huge community. In 2000, Nelson
City
had very few facilities and structures. The landscape was mostly undeveloped, with a large number of
trees
and wide space in the north of the
city
. On the left
side
of groups of
trees
, there was a university
alongside
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trees
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. The western
side
of the
city
had a train station. There was a
city
center
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at the
center
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of the
city
,
next
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to the
city
centre, there was an old market on the western
side
of the
city
. The southern
side
of the
city
was the port area. By
present
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day, considerable changes had taken place in the
town
as the number of buildings and public structures increased.
For example
, on the northern
side
of the
town
, many
trees
were demolished and replaced by a new shopping centre, near the university, there was
also
a tramline and a new train station. On the other
side
of the
town
, there was a new hall of residence near the university. There were new restaurants, bars and clubs constructed near
port
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.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words town, city, trees, side with synonyms.
Vocabulary: The word "present" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
Vocabulary: Use several vocabularies to present the data in the second paragraph.
Topic Vocabulary:
  • infrastructure
  • modifications
  • upgrades
  • facilities
  • commercial areas
  • residential zones
  • green spaces
  • recreational facilities
  • industrial areas
  • environmental conservation
  • eco-friendly
  • pollution control
  • distinct difference
  • notable change
  • expansion
  • decline
  • transformation
  • enhancement
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