The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugarcane.
The diagram gives information about the manufacturing process for making
sugar
from sugar
cane and I will explain how sugar
is produced.
First,
sugar
cane grows for 12 – 18 months outside and then
it must be picked up. This
can be done in two ways, if we have a big countryside it is better to use combine harvesters and engines or a farmer can pick by hand. After that, it is necessary to work and to make it, it is crushing
in a machine that transforms Wrong verb form
crushed
into
juice but to obtain a purifying juice it is used a limestone filter is needed to get rid of the impurities. Correct pronoun usage
it into
However
, the evaporator is used to transform juice in
syrup at high temperatures to avoid bacteria and Change preposition
into
then
centrifuge to separate sugar
crystal from the syrup.
The final step in the production of sugar
involves the drying and cooling of the extracted sugar
crystals, resulting in the production of sugar
that is
safe for consumption. This
process requires precision and a
keen attention to detail to ensure high-quality Remove the article
apply
sugar
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