The diagram below shows the manufacturing process for making sugar from sugarcane.

The diagram gives information about the manufacturing process for making

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from

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cane and I will explain how

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is produced.

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sugar

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cane grows for 12 – 18 months outside and

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it must be picked up.

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can be done in two ways, if we have a big countryside it is better to use combine harvesters and engines or a farmer can pick by hand. After that, it is necessary to work and to make it, it is

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in a machine that transforms

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juice but to obtain a purifying juice it is used a limestone filter is needed to get rid of the impurities.

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, the evaporator is used to transform juice

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syrup at high temperatures to avoid bacteria and

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centrifuge to separate

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crystal from the syrup. The final step in the production of

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involves the drying and cooling of the extracted

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crystals, resulting in the production of

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that is

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safe for consumption.

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process requires precision and

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keen attention to detail to ensure high-quality

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products.