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The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.

The chart below shows the number of households in the US by their annual income in 2007, 2011 and 2015.
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The bar chart gives information about how many American
families
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 with their yearly salaries in the years 2007, 2011 and 2015.
Overall
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, the
income
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 groups below $49,999 and above $75,000 experienced a rising trend and had some fluctuations,
while
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 the
income
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group
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 between $50,000 and $74,999 remained steady. In 2007, the number of
families
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 which earned over $100,000 were the largest, after four years, those
families
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 who received between $25,000 and $49,999 outraced it and became the biggest one.
However
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, the highest
income
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group
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 turned into the largest one again. The
families
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 who earned less than $49,000 showed a considerable increase. By 2007, there were 25
million
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families
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 earning under $25,000 slightly fewer than the 27
million
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 households receiving from $25,000 to $49,999. By the year 2015, both categories grew gradually, with approximately 28
million
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 households in each
group
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.
In contrast
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, the number of households whose
income
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 was between $50,000 and $99,999 was lower. These figures had a tiny change, which was under one
million
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. The highest
income
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group
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 with over $100,000 had the most significant change. During the period from 2007 to 2011, it went down to just under 30
million
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. After that, it rose to about 33
million
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.

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Sentences: Add more complex sentences.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words families, income, group, million with synonyms.
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Vocabulary: The word "change" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "number of" was used 2 times.
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Vocabulary: The word "about" was used 2 times.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Economic landscape
  • Household income
  • Economic health
  • Income brackets
  • Trends
  • Inflation
  • Unemployment rates
  • Job market
  • Income disparity
  • Housing affordability
  • Access to education
  • Quality of life
  • Economic policies
  • Income inequality
  • Mitigating
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