The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia

The pie charts compare ways of accessing the news in Canada and Australia
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The pie charts show the differences between the ways the
news
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is being received in
Canada
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and Australia.
It is clear that
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in both countries the most popular ways of accessing the
news
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are online and TV.
In contrast
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, print, radio and not specified sources are the least common in both countries. The Canadian’s preferences in
news
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sources are distributed more evenly than the ones of Australians. Looking at the information in more detail, we can see that in
Canada
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television and online media make up 40% and 36% of all information received respectively.
Similarly
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, in
Australia
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Australia,
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more than half of the
news
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is received online and slightly over
one third
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one-third
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via watching TV. The not specified section does not exceed three percentages in both pie charts and is the most uncommon source of information in
Canada
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.
Likewise
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, for the same
purpose
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purpose,
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only 2% of the
news
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is received via the radio in Australia.
However
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, in
Canada
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news
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obtained from the radio broadcasts accounts for slightly over
one tenth
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one-tenth
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the total amount.
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Vocabulary: Replace the words news, canada with synonyms.
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