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Scientists say that in the future humanity will speak the same language. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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Some scientists believe that in the future there is going to be only
one
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language
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 that humanity will speak. From my point of view,
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 largely a negative development, which will cause an enormous cultural loss.
It is clear that
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one
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 common
language
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 for all people can allow different nationalities and countries’ representatives to understand each other
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 never before. As an example, currently, there are a lot of
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 or phrases which either have dramatically different meanings or do not even exist in some languages, which disrupts a lot of people's mutual understanding.
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, even state representatives from around the world may have some issues
while
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 translating speeches or reports they make, negatively influencing relations between countries. With
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 single
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 all these misunderstandings will be eliminated.
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, with the appearance of
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 the cultural legacy of every country in the world will be lost. Nowadays, there are a huge number of untranslatable
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, phrases,
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 that have a major cultural and historical impact on each nationality. If humanity decides to induce
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 same
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, the history of each country will be sooner or later forgotten.
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 may say that humanity can translate
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 culturally significant
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 or phrases into a new
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;
nevertheless
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, they will not have the same strong and direct meaning.
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, Russian
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 borrowed
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 other languages continue
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 there; at the same time, they lose part of their meaning and depth. Taking everything into consideration,
while
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 benefit of better mutual understanding, it will become a cause of a dramatic cultural and historical loss. I believe that
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 universal
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 to be considered a negative development.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • enhanced
  • streamlining
  • diverse cultures
  • accelerate
  • exchange of information
  • erosion
  • linguistic diversity
  • dominance
  • unequal power dynamics
  • marginalizing
  • reinforce
  • economic benefits
  • reduced translation
  • diplomacy
  • acquisition
  • exacerbating
  • social inequalities
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