Some children spend hours every day on their smartphones. Why is this the case? Do you think this is a positive or a negative development?

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In recent years, technology has been
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sharply in various aspects of people's life. Phones are one of the most advanced and
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of human's technologies, which all people access to that and they get its benefit. The
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Phones is an unavoidable matter in many fields. In my view,
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development has more negative
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than positive
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, based on two reasons
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physiological and
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effects. It is obvious that
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many
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seriously
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troubles when spending more time with
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phone
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, which
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lack of sleep, obesity,
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in their school and mood swings.
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effect of playing mobile
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enough sleep.
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prefer to enjoy more excitation
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to sleep.
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, they were
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with playing mobile
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hours at night.
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, if teenagers spend a lot of their time mentioned act, they have a few activities,
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a
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they suffer
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such
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as obesity and vision problems.
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, when I go to my
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house, I show their
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busy to play
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. Another major trouble is
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sociality
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skills,
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making
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with other people. So, we can notice that these teenagers will endure less sociality
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.
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it is possible, they
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not safe and
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connections.
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, these
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not able to have correct and well
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,
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and friends.
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birthday, I recalled that
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of his friends sat down
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corner and he did not tend to connect with
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. His mother said he preferred
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spending his time
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playing phone
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of his friends. In conclusion, I believe that
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development in mobile and smartphone
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has more negative outcomes
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to positive impacts, since
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extreme use
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a smartphone
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smartphone
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, must suffer physical and social difficulties.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • smartphones
  • usage
  • technology
  • accessibility
  • convenience
  • entertainment
  • gaming
  • social media
  • communication
  • educational resources
  • addiction
  • dependence
  • negative effects
  • physical health
  • mental health
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